Abbot Merah of Redwall

[raqill]

Abbot Merah was born during a peaceful time in which the Skipper and his otters had chased out almost all of the Vermin that usually permeated Mossflower. In her years as a dibbun, she was taken by a band of vermin and held for ransom. When she got rescued by skipper, Merah was never the same. She was always quite and seemed to understand people extremely well, and was able to stop many a feud. Merah once had a vision from Martin the Warrior, and managed to send the Redwall warrior, Tirron, in time to stop the Gussiom from having a large crisis in hand. She is somewhat of an intellectual, her best friend being the abbot recorder. Merah spent many a day restoring the attic to its former state, including even Geminya's quarters. In one occasion she went down into the foundations, though she came back up very soon with a cotton mouth snapping after her. This shows she has an adventurous spirit.
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Though she hates fighting when she has to pick up a weapon, it is usually a pitchfork or a sling, and she wears the average redwall tunic plus a leather cap.

[ares007]

Good.

Don't forget that for females, it is "Abbess"

Also, it may be better to say something like "save the Guosim from a crisis" or something. "Wiped out" is a bit strong I think

[raqill]

Well, what else would it be when you get attacked at 2 A.M by a vermin band numbering 50+

[ares007]

well, maybe add, "stop the Guosim from getting wiped out by a large vermin night ambush" or something. It's not a huge deal, but I think more detail helps.

[raqill]

Got it. I'll edit it up...